My first draft

Summarize the main effects of globalization and discuss to what extent they are beneficial to your subject area.

Plan ;

Introduction - history/importance
1st paragraph - positive effects
2nd paragraph - negative effects
3rd paragraph - transition to my subject area (Science and Technology)
4th paragraph - positive effects on science and technology
5th paragraph - negative effects on science and technology
6th paragraph - conclusion

Topic sentences ;

Introduction - International integration has affected the world for centuries in several different ways.
1st paragraph - Many people think globalization has had a positive effect on the world.
2nd paragraph - However, critics of globalization argue that the effects are generally negative.
3rd paragraph - Science and Technology are a cause of globalization.
4th paragraph - Globalization of Science and Technology have many advantages.
5th paragraph - However, globalization of Science and Technology have some disadvantages.
6th paragraph - Conclusion

Introduction

Nowadays it is hard to refuse international integration that has affected the world for centuries in several different ways such as economy, technology, socio-culture, or even politic. There is a rapid increase in international trade and investment which is breaking down national borders and creating a single global economy, thanks to the spread of a global telecommunications infrastructure and greater trans-border data flow, using such technologies as the satellite TV, international media networks. However not everything is good, international integration also has both positive and negative sides.
On one side, some people believe that international integration has made us wealthier and allowed us to lead more diverse lifestyle. According to BBC news (2007), “the IT services boom has helped to transform the Indian economy, which is now growing at more than 9% per year”. On the other side, however, others argue that international integration have many negative effects, especially in developing countries are massive and rising poverty. According to BBC news (2004), Caribbean has been obtained deep-seated imbalances between the rich and the poor from international integration. Therefore, in this essay, first, I would like to illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of globalization. After that I will discuss the benefits related to my subject area, which is Science and Technology.